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Fadisas Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Confusion
Dear Fellows,
'Though it is so evident that everyone' s entering a new company may have humble beginnings, I can ...... '
Does this sentence sounds good ?
Or the word 'have' is not good here.
'may get humble beginnings , ' is better ?
Or another ... ?
Thank you!!
'Though it is so evident that everyone' s entering a new company may have humble beginnings, I can ...... '
Does this sentence sounds good ?
Or the word 'have' is not good here.
'may get humble beginnings , ' is better ?
Or another ... ?
Thank you!!
Top answer
The sentence is redundant (entering = beginning) and sounds rather silly out of context. I hope that it is not part of an application or motivation letter.
- The sentence is redundant (entering = beginning) and sounds rather silly out of context.
- I hope that it is not part of an application or motivation letter.
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The sentence is redundant (entering = beginning) and sounds rather silly out of context. I hope that it is not part of an application or motivation letter.
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The sentence is redundant (entering = beginning) and sounds rather silly out of context. I hope that it is not part of an application or motivation letter.
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