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Naked chef Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Confused with English usage!

Dear all,

Could you please help me with correcting my English?


  • "There is in-house dvd veiwing service provided in the library where the children watch cartoon collection"
  • "The children from Kaya had a look around the library."

Thanks in advance for your kind help

Naked Chef

  

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Hi Chef, How about saying: Children can watch cartoons at the in-house viewing service provided by the library. The children from Kaya had a look around the library. This sentence is OK.

— JohnParis

  • Hi Chef, How about saying: Children can watch cartoons at the in-house viewing service provided by the library.
  • The children from Kaya had a look around the library.
  • This sentence is OK.
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Hi Chef,


How about saying:

Children can watch cartoons at the in-house viewing service provided by the library.

The children from Kaya had a look around the library. This sentence is OK.
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