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WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Conforming to the usage of English.

Hello
This is my homework.
I am not sure these sentences conform to the usage of English.
Can you help me edit them.
Thank you very much


The advent of computer really helps students gain knowledge more quickly than in the past.

I share the view that computer technology is attributed to the useful tool that broadens students’ horizon.

The Internet enables students to enhance their level of knowledge.

The Internet equips students with knowledge they will need in the any field
  

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The computer helps students gain knowledge more quickly than in the past. [ 'the advent' is not what helps, **** Chun-- it is the computer itself. ] I share the view that computer technology is a useful tool that broadens students’ horizons.

— Mister Micawber

  • The computer helps students gain knowledge more quickly than in the past.
  • [ 'the advent' is not what helps, **** Chun-- it is the computer itself.
  • ] I share the view that computer technology is a useful tool that broadens students’ horizons.
  • The Internet enhances students' level of knowledge.
  • The Internet can equip students with knowledge they will need in any field.
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The computer helps students gain knowledge more quickly than in the past. ['the advent' is not what helps, **** Chun-- it is the computer itself.]

I share the view that computer technology is a useful tool that broadens students’ horizons.

The Internet enhances students' level of knowledge.

The Internet can equip students with knowledge they will need in any fi
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