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Aelia Posted 19 years ago
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0 I dont complain, i dont regret ... 02 br
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00 I am sad because i cant let this feeling go.. 02 br
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00 I was blind or i didnt see.. 02 br
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00 Something that was never meant to be.. 02 br
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00 I felt as i was flying high 02 br
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00 With no worries that can pass by.. 02 br
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00 But time has made me realize.. 02 br
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00 Dreams are meant for sleep 02 br
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00 Wishes never come true.. 02 br
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00 When i look at this never-ending highway, 02 br
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00 I find no one to hold my hand.. 02 br
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00 I have to go alone... 02 br
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00 And this is my destiny I know that... 0-
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00 I am sad because i cant let this feeling go.. 02 br
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00 I was blind or i didnt see.. 02 br
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00 Something that was never meant to be.. 02 br
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00 I felt as i was flying high 02 br
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00 With no worries that can pass by.. 02 br
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00 But time has made me realize.. 02 br
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00 Dreams are meant for sleep 02 br
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00 Wishes never come true.. 02 br
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00 When i look at this never-ending highway, 02 br
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00 I find no one to hold my hand.. 02 br
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00 I have to go alone... 02 br
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00 And this is my destiny I know that... 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 However the content of the poem is average. 02 br 02 br 00 However, if I was rating this out of 100, I would pick 34. 0-
- 02 br 02 br 00 However the content of the poem is average.
- 02 br 02 br 00 However, if I was rating this out of 100, I would pick 34.
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0 I cannot fathom why you dont use "I", instead you use "i" a lot, this takes from the poem. 02 br
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00 The poem feels like a conclusion is warranted and that you made a half-attempt at creating this, maybe rushing it. 02 br
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00 However the content of the poem is average. It is enjoyable to read and can understand the thought process completely, I actuall
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00 The poem feels like a conclusion is warranted and that you made a half-attempt at creating this, maybe rushing it. 02 br
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00 However the content of the poem is average. It is enjoyable to read and can understand the thought process completely, I actuall
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0 Hi Triquediqual... 02 br
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00 Can u tell me: 02 br
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00 Do I have any potential to write poetry? 02 br
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00 If yes, how can I improve my writing skills? 02 br
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00 Aelia 05 0 010id 1
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00 Can u tell me: 02 br
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00 Do I have any potential to write poetry? 02 br
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00 If yes, how can I improve my writing skills? 02 br
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0 It's a bit strange to mix up sections that have a rhyme scheme and sections that don't. 02 br
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00 Free-form poetry can be excellent but the best writers start from a good knowledge of standard poetry forms. Writing within one of these forms (for example a sonnet or haiku) is an excellent discipline and will help teach you to make every word count and to search for the exact
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00 Free-form poetry can be excellent but the best writers start from a good knowledge of standard poetry forms. Writing within one of these forms (for example a sonnet or haiku) is an excellent discipline and will help teach you to make every word count and to search for the exact
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0 Nona's advice is quite good as well. 02 br
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00 As for having potential, everyone has potenial, some just excel further than others. Depends how much you want to learn? 02 br
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00 Advice, seek the help from websites that have veteran poets. They will give the best basic advice, better than I probably would give . Just do a google search. 0-
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00 As for having potential, everyone has potenial, some just excel further than others. Depends how much you want to learn? 02 br
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00 Advice, seek the help from websites that have veteran poets. They will give the best basic advice, better than I probably would give . Just do a google search. 0-
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