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Dileepa Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Conditionals

I wrote following sentence, but I'm not completely sure it is grammatically correct and implying what I want to mention.


This is the sentence.

The main reason for this is, given the choice most companies would probably select a business oriented approach rather than a socially friendly measure.


The ideas that I wanted to mention are in bellow.


The main reason for this is,

I need to mentions this is because of the idea that I've mentioned in previous sentence.


given the choice most companies

If companies were given the choice


Other parts of the sentence are normal and I'm sure about the that. Please tell someone is there any wrong with my sentence.

  

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I suggest this: The main reason for this is that , given the choice , most companies would probably select a business - oriented approach rather than a socially friendly measure.

  • I suggest this: The main reason for this is that , given the choice , most companies would probably select a business - oriented approach rather than a socially friendly measure.
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I suggest this:

The main reason for this is that, given the choice, most companies would probably select a business-oriented approach rather than a socially friendly measure.

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