Conclusion for an essay
Could you please tell me if this conclusion for an essay is correct:
In conclusion, what has been discussed I can sum up and say fluently that I agree with this opinion...
If it is not, how can I change it?
Thank you in advance.
Top answer
Well, it may be correct, but it is a very wordy, verbose and garrulous sentence. Do not mention your writing. " "In conclusion" and "sum up" say the same thing, so it is very repetitive.
- Well, it may be correct, but it is a very wordy, verbose and garrulous sentence.
- Do not mention your writing.
- " "In conclusion" and "sum up" say the same thing, so it is very repetitive.
- Delete one of them.
- "Fluently" refers to an advanced ability in speaking.
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Well, it may be correct, but it is a very wordy, verbose and garrulous sentence.
Do not mention your writing. Delete "what has been discussed."
"In conclusion" and "sum up" say the same thing, so it is very repetitive. Delete one of them.
"Fluently" refers to an advanced ability in speaking. It does not belong.
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