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Antonija Posted 17 years ago
Vocabulary
Conclusion
Can you please help me with two questions:
1. Which phrase is more appropriate here, "in conclusion" or "we conclude"?
2. Is there a phrase which would fit better in this context than "more successful"? The target meaning here is "more precise, more accurate".
We conclude that TWG technique/In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more successful in positioning the chest tube on desired place in the pleural cavity commpared to CS technique.
Thank you in advance
1. Which phrase is more appropriate here, "in conclusion" or "we conclude"?
2. Is there a phrase which would fit better in this context than "more successful"? The target meaning here is "more precise, more accurate".
We conclude that TWG technique/In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more successful in positioning the chest tube on desired place in the pleural cavity commpared to CS technique.
Thank you in advance
Top answer
1-- Either will do. 2-- Use 'accurate/precise'.
- 1-- Either will do.
- 2-- Use 'accurate/precise'.
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I was wondering if you can use "precise" without a noun after it, as in my sentence?
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Using precise, accurate, successful or any other adjective in that position requires no further noun; they are all predicate adjectives modifying 'technique'.
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Using precise, accurate, successful or any other adjective in that position requires no further noun; they are all predicate adjectives modifying 'technique'.
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I have to insert the phrase in italics here.
1) Can you please tell me if it is OK to say OF human cadaver model?
2) Are HUMAN and MODEL redundant here? Or should I leave out everything after CAVITY?
In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more precise in placing the chest tube in intended position in the pleural cavity of human cadaver model compared to CS technique.
1) Can you please tell me if it is OK to say OF human cadaver model?
2) Are HUMAN and MODEL redundant here? Or should I leave out everything after CAVITY?
In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more precise in placing the chest tube in intended position in the pleural cavity of human cadaver model compared to CS technique.
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Could you just post in plain text? I cannot figure all that out.
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Could you just post in plain text? I cannot figure all that out.
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Ups, sorry..
Here it is:
In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more precise in placing the chest tube in intended position in the pleural cavity (of human cadaver model) compared to CS technique thoracostomy.
Here it is:
In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more precise in placing the chest tube in intended position in the pleural cavity (of human cadaver model) compared to CS technique thoracostomy.
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Well, you got rid of some of the HTML code.
1) Can you please tell me if it is OK to say OF human cadaver model?-- 'Cadaver' is a grisly word.
2) Are HUMAN and MODEL redundant here? Or should I leave out everything after CAVITY?-- I suppose you need some initial reference to the fact that real bodies are not being used; if you have done that, you do not ne
Well, you got rid of some of the HTML code.
1) Can you please tell me if it is OK to say OF human cadaver model?-- 'Cadaver' is a grisly word.
2) Are HUMAN and MODEL redundant here? Or should I leave out everything after CAVITY?-- I suppose you need some initial reference to the fact that real bodies are not being used; if you have done that, you do not ne
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