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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Concluding Sentence

Is a concluding sentence necessary for this paragraph?

Slavery is forced labour. It is contingent upon at least, and typically, two classes; the victim, and the master who forces the labour. This labour can be as simple as washing clothes, yet is usually more strenuous than not as the definition suggests. In a slanderous manner the victim could be your washing machine, however the more literal manner is anything living and breathing.

I am writing a paper about slavery and would greatly appreciate any help! I would like to thank whomever takes their time to lend a helping hand!

Thanks!!
  

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Hi, Here are my first reactions on reading this. Why are you using the word 'slanderous'? Are you suggesting that your washing machine is your slave?

  • Hi, Here are my first reactions on reading this.
  • Why are you using the word 'slanderous'?
  • Are you suggesting that your washing machine is your slave?
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Here are my first reactions on reading this.

Why are you using the word 'slanderous'?

Are you suggesting that your washing machine is your slave?

Best wishes, Clive

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