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SabineKatz Posted 6 years ago
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Concise enough?
Is the following sentence concise enough or does it contain words that are not necessary for sense-making?
Younger and more highly-educated managers in higher-level positions than it used to be in the past caused a shift in organizational values.
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Having/placing/there being/etc. younger and more highly-educated managers in higher-level positions than formerly caused a shift in organizational values.
- Having/placing/there being/etc.
- younger and more highly-educated managers in higher-level positions than formerly caused a shift in organizational values.
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Having/placing/there being/etc. younger and more highly-educated managers in higher-level positions than formerly caused a shift in organizational values.
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