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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

Concept which we espouse"

Is this good English for a paper or does it sound too pompous?

"In the first section, we introduce the concept of God which we espouse."

Thank you.
  

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It's not very natural. Just use the first part; it's fine. In the first section, we introduce the concept of ***.

— AlpheccaStars

  • It's not very natural.
  • Just use the first part; it's fine.
  • In the first section, we introduce the concept of ***.
  • Or In the first section, we introduce our concept of ***.
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It's not very natural. Just use the first part; it's fine.
In the first section, we introduce the concept of ***.

Or
In the first section, we introduce our concept of ***.
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AlpheccaStarsIn the first section, we introduce our concept of ***.
I'll use this.
Thank you very much!
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