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Sachinnihcas2000 Posted 14 years ago
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Please help me to correct below paragraph..
The Government had incurred loss of huge vote banks from northern side of state. It failed to inhibit penetration of refugee in northern part of country. Insurgent people opposed government for not helping and decided not to vote for this government on next election. There were other incidents amid invading of refugee, Government failed to stop.
The Government had incurred loss of huge vote banks from northern side of state. It failed to inhibit penetration of refugee in northern part of country. Insurgent people opposed government for not helping and decided not to vote for this government on next election. There were other incidents amid invading of refugee, Government failed to stop.
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I have underlined some problem areas; most of them can be solved with the definite article: The Government had incurr ed lo ss of huge vote banks fr om no rthern side of state. It failed to inhi bit pe netration of refugee in no rthern part o f cou ntry. Insurgent people oppos ed gov ernment for not helping and decided not to vote for this government on ne xt election.
- I have underlined some problem areas; most of them can be solved with the definite article: The Government had incurr ed lo ss of huge vote banks fr om no rthern side of state.
- It failed to inhi bit pe netration of refugee in no rthern part o f cou ntry.
- Insurgent people oppos ed gov ernment for not helping and decided not to vote for this government on ne xt election.
- There were other incidents am id invading of refugee, Gove rnment failed to stop.
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I have underlined some problem areas; most of them can be solved with the definite article:
The Government had incurred loss of huge vote banks from northern side of state. It failed to inhibit penetration of refugee in northern part of country. Insurgent people opposed government for not helping and decided not
The Government had incurred loss of huge vote banks from northern side of state. It failed to inhibit penetration of refugee in northern part of country. Insurgent people opposed government for not helping and decided not
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I modified below paragraph as per your suggestion.
The Government had incurred the loss of huge votes from the northern side of state. It failed to inhibit the penetration of refugee in the northern part of country. The insurgent people opposed the government for not helping and decided not to vote for this government on the next election. There were other incidents amid penetration of th
The Government had incurred the loss of huge votes from the northern side of state. It failed to inhibit the penetration of refugee in the northern part of country. The insurgent people opposed the government for not helping and decided not to vote for this government on the next election. There were other incidents amid penetration of th
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The Government had incurred the loss of huge voter banks from the northern part of the state. It failed to inhibit the penetration of refugees into the northern part of the country. The insurgents opposed the government for not helping and decided not to vote for this government in the next election. There were other incidents amid the invasion
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