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Please help me to correct below paragraph...

"Town hall meeting for Recreation activities planning on next summer"

End of the last month, Town hall meeting was planned. President had sent invitation letter to everyone’s home to prepare activities list for meeting. In meeting, when people started to discuss their proposal on recreation activities, President requested everyone to stop for a moment and told them that it was very difficult to accept all activities suggested by you so finally he rejected some of them. Some of them were disgruntled by knowing that their requests were not accepted and started disputing on President’s decision. They thought they were disrepute by not welcoming their opinions. They thought to disrupt meeting by not letting allow permission of other’s activities. They tried to distract president from main topic of meeting, but finally President declared activities list for next summer and requested everyone to prepare themselves for next time so original purpose of town hall meeting do not get dwindle.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

I have underlined some problem areas, Sachin, and I have struck out unneeded verbiage. Please try to correct them and post your revised version here.

"Town hall meeting for Recreation activities planning on next summer"

End of the last month, Town hall meeting was planned. had sent invitation letter to everyone~~’s home~~ to prepare activities list for meeting. In meeting, when people started to discuss their proposal on recreation activities, President requested everyone to stop for a moment and told them that it was very difficult to accept all activities suggested by you so finally he rejected some of them. Some of them were disgruntled by knowing that their requests were not accepted and started disputing on President’s decision. They thought they were disrepute by not welcoming their opinions. They thought to disrupt meeting by not letting allow permission of other’s activities. They tried to distract president from main topic of meeting, but finally President declared activities list for next summer and requested everyone to prepare themselves for next time so original purpose of town hall meeting do not get dwindle.

Sachinnihcas2000 · Answer

I tried to correct some of the sentences as per my understanding... Please help me to correct remaning one...

"Town hall meeting for recreation activities planning for next summer"

End of last month, town hall meeting was planned. Invitation letter was sent to everyone to prepare list of activities for meeting. In meeting, when people started to discuss their proposal for recreation activities, the president requested everyone to stop for a moment and told them that it was very difficult to accept all activities suggested by you so finally he rejected some of them. Some of them were disgruntled by knowing that their requests were not accepted and started disputing on the president’s decision. They thought they were been disrepute by not welcoming their opinions. They thought to disrupt meeting by not allowing permission of other’s activities. They tried to distract the president from the main topic of meeting, but finally president had declared activities for next summer and requested everyone to prepare themselves for next time so original purpose of the town hall meeting should not get dwindle.

Mister Micawber · Answer

You have fixed some, but please think about the grammar and structure that you have learned. I have underlined remaining problem areas. Underlining between words = missing words:

Town hall meeting for recreation activities planning for next summer

End of last month, town hall meeting was planned. Invitation letter was sent to everyone to prepare list of activities for meeting. In meeting, when people started to discuss their proposal for recreational activities, the president requested everyone to stop for a moment and told them that it was very difficult to accept all activities suggested by you so finally he rejected some of them. Some of them were disgruntled by knowing that their requests were not accepted and started disputing the president’s decision. They thought they were ???? by not welcoming their opinions. They thought to disrupt meeting by not allowing ~~permission of~~ other’s activities. They tried to distract the president from the main topic of meeting, but finally president ~~had~~ announced the activities for next summer and requested everyone to prepare themselves for next time so original purpose of the town hall meeting should not dwindle.

Sachinnihcas2000 · Answer

I did not get what I missed between "by knowing". I modified rest of paragraph as per my understanding. It looks like I have problem in not putting capital before noun.

Town hall meeting for recreation activities planning for next summer

The end of last month, the town hall meeting was planned. The invitation letter was sent to everyone to prepare the list of activities for the meeting. In the meeting, when people started to discuss their proposal for recreational activities, the president requested everyone to stop for a moment and told them that it was very difficult to accept all the activities suggested by all of you, so finally he rejected some of them. Some of them were disgruntled by knowing that their requests were not accepted and started disputing the president’s decision. They thought they were not respected by not welcoming their opinions. They thought to disrupt the meeting by not allowing other’s activities. They tried to distract the president from the main topic of the meeting, but finally the president announced the activities for next summer and requested everyone to prepare themselves for next time so the original purpose of the town hall meeting should not dwindle.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Town hall meeting for recreation activities planning for next summer

At the end of last month, a town hall meeting was planned. An invitation letter was sent to everyone to prepare a list of activities for the meeting. In the meeting, when people started to discuss their proposal for recreational activities, the president requested everyone to stop for a moment and told them that it was very difficult to accept all the activities they suggested, so finally he rejected some of them. Some of them were disgruntled to hear that their requests were not accepted and started disputing the president’s decision. They thought he did not respect them. They thought to disrupt the meeting by not allowing other’s activities. They tried to distract the president from the main topic of the meeting, but finally the president announced the activities for next summer and requested everyone to prepare themselves for next time so that the original purpose of the town hall meeting should not dwindle.

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