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Joseph A Posted 4 years ago
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Hello everyone,

Could you please correct the mistakes in the following composition about "marriage"?

Marriage

Marriage is a legal and social contract between two individuals that unites their lives legally, economically, and emotionally.

When we reach a certain age or grow up, we might want to choose someone to be part of our lives and to spend life with. So we have to be very careful in choosing a right person. That is why, the two individuals should understand each other and know their differences and habits before making the last decision so that they will have a successful life.

Marriage is an important process in everyone's life. So the couples have to know how to deal with it carefully for the sake of their future lives.

P.S. I know my composition is short or somewhat repitetive. No good ideas came to mind??.

Regards,

Joseph


  

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Marriage is a legal and social contract between two adults individuals that unites their lives legally, economically, and emotionally. When we reach a certain age or grow up, we might want to choose someone to be part of our lives and to spend life with. So we have to be very careful in choosing the right person.

  • Marriage is a legal and social contract between two adults individuals that unites their lives legally, economically, and emotionally.
  • When we reach a certain age or grow up, we might want to choose someone to be part of our lives and to spend life with.
  • So we have to be very careful in choosing the right person.
  • That is why, the two individuals should understand each other and know their differences and habits before making the last decision so that they will have a successful marriage.
  • life .
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Marriage is a legal and social contract between two adults individuals that unites their lives legally, economically, and emotionally.

When we reach a certain age or grow up, we might want to choose someone to be part of our lives and to spend life with. So we have to be very careful in choosing the

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