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Joseph A Posted 7 years ago
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Hello everyone,

Could you please make corrections to my composition if there are any mistakes?

I was a clever student at primary school, and when I was in high school, I was given gifts every year due to my cleverness. Everything went well up to twelfth grade. I tried a lot and got tired. Despite happening some bad events to me, I didn't stop trying. Everything that happened later was unexpected. I couldn't get high marks, so I was admitted to a college which wasn't to my liking. This situation hurt me a lot, and made me not try, and decrease my chances of success in my studies.

Regards,

Joseph

  

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Joseph A I was given gifts every year due to my cleverness. This is possible, but strange. It could just be unfamiliarity on my part but, what exactly do you mean?

  • Joseph A I was given gifts every year due to my cleverness.
  • This is possible, but strange.
  • It could just be unfamiliarity on my part but, what exactly do you mean?
  • Joseph A Despite happening some bad events to me, The highlighted word is the in the wrong place.
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Joseph AI was given gifts every year due to my cleverness.

This is possible, but strange. It could just be unfamiliarity on my part but, what exactly do you mean?

Joseph ADespite happening some bad events to me,

The highlighted word is the in the wrong place.

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