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Waking up to some shocking news of the passing of XXX. Just yesterday I was watching one of her latest movie called XXX, and was so admiring her acting style at this age of 58. But, today she is no more. Gosh, I'm so shocked and heartbroken. May god give peace to her soul and strength to the family.

  

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Hi That's a really good paragraph You need an 's' after movie - one of her latest movies But that's minor - it's a good composition Dave

  • Hi That's a really good paragraph You need an 's' after movie - one of her latest movies But that's minor - it's a good composition Dave
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Hi

That's a really good paragraph

You need an 's' after movie - one of her latest movies

But that's minor - it's a good composition

Dave

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I woke Waking up to some the shocking news of the passing of ***. Just yesterday, I was watching one of her latest movies, called ***, and was so really

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