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Garden of Life
Life can be compared to a garden. There are many reasons to do so. Firstly life is fresh and beautiful just like a garden. A garden needs to be maintained well. In the same way life has to be lived, that is every moment has to be enjoyed. Just like there are different kinds of people in life, there are many varieties of plants in a garden. Some people like plants that give out pleasant fragrance, make the people around happy and peaceful. Some plants in the garden are neither sweet smelling nor are they bitter, but they are just there without anything in them that catches people's attention. Similarly in life there are some people who do not create much impact in others; they just live rather exist. And there are some who are capable of causing any harm to others by their words and deeds. This kind of people can be compared to those plants that have thorns and those which give out pungent smell whereby causing a feeling of unpleasantness among the people at large. On the whole all these differences be it in human life or garden make each of them unique and beautiful!