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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

complimentary shaved ice

For an expression of a promotional campaign of a cafeteria,
could you please check if the following is grammatically correct?

When the daytime high temperature reaches 3° Celsius higher than the average on the same day last year, every visitor will receive a complimentary shaved ice.
  

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moguwai007 every visitor will receive a complimentary shaved ice. Do you mean that they get crushed ice in their water or beverage of choice? Or a snow cone for dessert?

  • moguwai007 every visitor will receive a complimentary shaved ice.
  • Do you mean that they get crushed ice in their water or beverage of choice?
  • Or a snow cone for dessert?
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moguwai007every visitor will receive a complimentary shaved ice.
Do you mean that they get crushed ice in their water or beverage of choice? Or a snow cone for dessert?
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There is no average on a single day, and it isn't hottest at night.

When the temperature reaches 3°C higher than on the same day last year, every visitor will receive a complimentary shaved ice.
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Yes, it's Hawaiian dessert, an ice-based dessert made by shaving a block of ice.

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