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Navitasan Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Complicated possessive

Are these sentences correct:

1-The car the chrome of whose bumper was too shiny belonged to John.

2-The car the chrome of the bumper of which was too shiny belonged to John.

3-The car the chrome of whose bumper I had scratched belonged to John.

4-The car the chrome of the bumper of which I had scratched belonged to John.

Gratefully,
Navi.
  

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g. "The car, the chrome of whose bumper was too shiny, belonged to John") but they are all a bit horrible, (2) and (4) especially so. They look like example sentences constructed to prove a grammatical point rather than natural language.

  • g.
  • "The car, the chrome of whose bumper was too shiny, belonged to John") but they are all a bit horrible, (2) and (4) especially so.
  • They look like example sentences constructed to prove a grammatical point rather than natural language.
  • ) or "The car whose chrome bumper I had scratched belonged to John".
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I think commas would help (e.g. "The car, the chrome of whose bumper was too shiny, belonged to John") but they are all a bit horrible, (2) and (4) especially so. They look like example sentences constructed to prove a grammatical point rather than natural language. Say it another way, such as "The car with the very shiny chrome bumper belonged to John" (why would a chrome bumper be "too" shiny?)

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