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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Hi,
I'm trying to explain the picture captured from a movie. Ms.A was a neighbour of Ms.B. Ms.B committed suicide by stopping her car on the railway and she was crashed to death by a train. Ms.C is the wife of the train engineer who was in charge of the train. In the picture, Ms.A is talking to Ms.C. Is the following understandable to native speakers?
Ms.A is talking to the woman, whose husband is the train engineer of the train which had crashed with a car and killed the driver, about the suicide of the woman who was the driver.
Thanks for any help.
I'm trying to explain the picture captured from a movie. Ms.A was a neighbour of Ms.B. Ms.B committed suicide by stopping her car on the railway and she was crashed to death by a train. Ms.C is the wife of the train engineer who was in charge of the train. In the picture, Ms.A is talking to Ms.C. Is the following understandable to native speakers?
Ms.A is talking to the woman, whose husband is the train engineer of the train which had crashed with a car and killed the driver, about the suicide of the woman who was the driver.
Thanks for any help.
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This too complex. Perhaps: Ms. A is talking to the wife of the engineer of the train that had crashed into a car, killing its suicidal driver, a woman who was her neighbor.
- This too complex.
- Perhaps: Ms.
- A is talking to the wife of the engineer of the train that had crashed into a car, killing its suicidal driver, a woman who was her neighbor.
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This too complex. Perhaps:
Ms. A is talking to the wife of the engineer of the train that had crashed into a car, killing its suicidal driver, a woman who was her neighbor.
Ms. A is talking to the wife of the engineer of the train that had crashed into a car, killing its suicidal driver, a woman who was her neighbor.
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