Is this sentence correct:
"I remember a boy who had been to America to undergo a surgical operation, and later he received the visit of his surgeon doctor, in his hometown, who upon their reunion, offered him a remotely controlled car."
Christine Christie Is this sentence correct: Almost. For one thing, there is too much for one sentence. "I remember a boy who had been to America to undergo a surgical operation.
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Christine ChristieIs this sentence correct:
Almost. For one thing, there is too much for one sentence.
"I remember a boy who had been to America to undergo a surgical operation. Later, the surgeon visited him in his hometown and upon their reunion gave the boy a remote-control car."