0
Apollo135 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Complex sentence

dear all,

could someone please tell me if these sentenses are correct?

1 - With cost effectiveness and world competitiveness of a technological imperative today, the future impact of ...

or

2 - With cost efficiency a technological imperative today, the ...

thanks in advance for reply,

Apollo

PS; any example regardinother similar sentences will be appreciated!
  

Top answer

You have used big words and sentence structure in an incomplete sentence. It's hard to determine what exactly your tried to say. Please reword the sentence in a more tangible context.

— Dimsumexpress

  • You have used big words and sentence structure in an incomplete sentence.
  • It's hard to determine what exactly your tried to say.
  • Please reword the sentence in a more tangible context.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

3 Answers
0
You have used big words and sentence structure in an incomplete sentence. It's hard to determine what exactly your tried to say. Please reword the sentence in a more tangible context.
0
0
thanks for reply!

yes! it is true the two sentenses contain big words! actually this is why I asked for help

here is an example:

With the cost efficiency a technological imperative today, the future impact of computers systems does not depend on new theories alone. Such developments will require ...

regards and thanks again for help,

Apollo
0
0
apollo135With the cost efficiency a technological imperative today, the future impact of computers systems does not depend on new theories alone. Such developments will require ...
The orange portion is a preposition clause supporting the green portion w
0

Related Questions