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Vincent Teo Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

completing/ finishing the project

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00When John nad his friends found the wild plant, they collected it as the science project. They came back to school with the plant.02br
00They took care of it well. After a few months, it grew well. They enjoyed completing / finishing the project. 0-
  

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02br 00Vincent, I suppose I might have told you this before, but putting such simple vocabulary into such simple sentences joined together creates the style of a passage written by a 6-year-old. 0-

  • 02br 00Vincent, I suppose I might have told you this before, but putting such simple vocabulary into such simple sentences joined together creates the style of a passage written by a 6-year-old.
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00Vincent, I suppose I might have told you this before, but putting such simple vocabulary into such simple sentences joined together creates the style of a passage written by a 6-year-old. You need to put into use the grammar that we have been teaching you this past year and show a bit more sophistication in your composition.0-
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0 Sorry, I can't get what you mean here. I already tried to do it in a short paragraph. 02br
00I just don't know whether the word choice that I used is correct or incorrect. 0-
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0My suggestion02br
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00When John and his friends found the wild plant, they collected it for the science project and took it back to school. Here, they nurtured the plant and after a few months it was growing nicely. They enjoyed the (whole) project from start to finish. 0-

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