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Chalk park 550 Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Complaint

You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it.

Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express:

why you went to the shop/office

how the employees behaved to offend you

what you expect the company to do

Dear sir

I am writing this letter to have your attention about the poor services your employees provided for me last week.

On Monday I went to your restaurant to have a lunch and I was unsatisfied with the deneanor of the waiter. I ordered some beefsteak and I would like it to be well done. I have to wait in 30 minutes that they bring me my food without the explaination for my waiting. but the meet was rare and not was well done as I asked before. I required them to make it again but he ignored me and go away.

What was happen on that they make me really fell to be offend and uncomfortable. I want you to take my complaint seriouly and retrain your staff to make sure that this issue will not occure anymore.

I am looking to hearing from you.

your sincerely

Alice

  

Top answer

You did not follow the instructions. The poor service was from a shop or an office that you went to. A restaurant is not a shop or an office.

  • You did not follow the instructions.
  • The poor service was from a shop or an office that you went to.
  • A restaurant is not a shop or an office.
  • Can you try again?
  • There are many errors in your writing, but you should write according to the instructions.
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You did not follow the instructions.

The poor service was from a shop or an office that you went to.
A restaurant is not a shop or an office. Can you try again?

There are many errors in your writing, but you should write according to the instructions. Also, please post writing exercises in the writing forum:

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