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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Complain Letter
Anyone could improve the short letter below? Please put a reason for any changes. Thanks!
Dear sir,
I would like to draw your attention to the allocation reentered to many schools for the past two years by the state goverment. These schools are mainly semi-aided schools such as SJK(C) and SJK(Tamil). Allocation also includes Chinese Independent Schools and Region Schools. Our school have tried to apply but regretably, it is unattended. We look foward to being given the same opportunity as schools are also among those who need the support to upgrade the school. We hope that you will give your immediate attention to highlight us for the help of from the state goverment.
Yours sincerely,
Lin Dan.
Dear sir,
I would like to draw your attention to the allocation reentered to many schools for the past two years by the state goverment. These schools are mainly semi-aided schools such as SJK(C) and SJK(Tamil). Allocation also includes Chinese Independent Schools and Region Schools. Our school have tried to apply but regretably, it is unattended. We look foward to being given the same opportunity as schools are also among those who need the support to upgrade the school. We hope that you will give your immediate attention to highlight us for the help of from the state goverment.
Yours sincerely,
Lin Dan.
Top answer
Dear Mr [surname], I would like to draw your attention to our situation regarding the state government allocations to schools for the past two years. Assisted schools are mainly semi-aided schools such as SJK(C) and SJK(Tamil). Allocation has also included Chinese Independent Schools and Regional Schools.
- Dear Mr [surname], I would like to draw your attention to our situation regarding the state government allocations to schools for the past two years.
- Assisted schools are mainly semi-aided schools such as SJK(C) and SJK(Tamil).
- Allocation has also included Chinese Independent Schools and Regional Schools.
- Our school has tried to apply , but regrettably our application has not been accepted.
- We look foward to being given the same opportunity as other schools who need support to upgrade t hemselves .
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Dear Mr [surname],
I would like to draw your attention to our situation regarding the state government allocations to schools for the past two years. Assisted schools are mainly semi-aided schools such as SJK(C) and SJK(Tamil). Allocation has also included Chinese Independent Schools and Regional Schools. Our school has tried to apply, b
I would like to draw your attention to our situation regarding the state government allocations to schools for the past two years. Assisted schools are mainly semi-aided schools such as SJK(C) and SJK(Tamil). Allocation has also included Chinese Independent Schools and Regional Schools. Our school has tried to apply, b
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