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Wanderer Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Compisition: Travel Is The Best Teacher
Hi, teachers,
I tried hard to make it complete, but I know I wrote it just by my mother-tongue logic.
What's worse, I can't judge it by myself. I think it somewhat irrelevant to its topic, but I don't know how to improve.
If anyone could correct it for me, I am really appreciated! Thank you!
Travel Is The Best Teacher
With the development of transport technology, it is much easier to travel around the world.
Therefore, we can not only learn many things by reading, but also take a look at the landscapes
and experience the cultural differences in person. That is, no matter what books are telling, we can
judge it by ourselves rather than take it all in.
My parents and I often go mountain climbing on weekends. Wind blowing, trees whispering,
flowers in full bloom, I wonder eagerly who creates these all. That is why I take interest in biology
so much. Besides, I can be close to the insects and observe the looks that they really are
instead of staring at pictures on books. Though I have never been abroad, I am convinced
that someday I will go and learn much out of the travel.
I tried hard to make it complete, but I know I wrote it just by my mother-tongue logic.
What's worse, I can't judge it by myself. I think it somewhat irrelevant to its topic, but I don't know how to improve.
If anyone could correct it for me, I am really appreciated! Thank you!
Travel Is The Best Teacher
With the development of transport technology, it is much easier to travel around the world.
Therefore, we can not only learn many things by reading, but also take a look at the landscapes
and experience the cultural differences in person. That is, no matter what books are telling, we can
judge it by ourselves rather than take it all in.
My parents and I often go mountain climbing on weekends. Wind blowing, trees whispering,
flowers in full bloom, I wonder eagerly who creates these all. That is why I take interest in biology
so much. Besides, I can be close to the insects and observe the looks that they really are
instead of staring at pictures on books. Though I have never been abroad, I am convinced
that someday I will go and learn much out of the travel.
Top answer
Wanderer Travel Is The Best Teacher With the development of transport technology, it has become much easier to travel around the world. Therefore, we can not only learn many things in reading, but also (delete take a look at the landscapes and) experience the landscapes and cultural differences in people . That is, no matter what books convey , we judge it by ourselves rather than taking it all in.
- Wanderer Travel Is The Best Teacher With the development of transport technology, it has become much easier to travel around the world.
- Therefore, we can not only learn many things in reading, but also (delete take a look at the landscapes and) experience the landscapes and cultural differences in people .
- That is, no matter what books convey , we judge it by ourselves rather than taking it all in.
- My parents and I often go mountain climbing on weekends.
- When I hear the wind blowing, trees whispering, and watc h flowers blooming , I wonder eagerly who created them all.
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Wanderer
Travel Is The Best Teacher
With the development of transport technology, it has become much easier to travel around the world.
Therefore, we can not only learn many things in reading, but also (delete take a look at the landscapes and) experien
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Thank you very much!! ^_^
This is my first time to post my compisition in the forum, and I am so happy to receive your reply.
With this corrected one, I can review the words I used and the way I expressed myself.
Hope someday I will be able to write and share something interesting to everyone in this forum, not just ask some correction for me!
This is my first time to post my compisition in the forum, and I am so happy to receive your reply.
With this corrected one, I can review the words I used and the way I expressed myself.
Hope someday I will be able to write and share something interesting to everyone in this forum, not just ask some correction for me!
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I really like your composition - it is definitely interesting
This phrase is just wonderful: "Wind blowing, trees whisper
This phrase is just wonderful: "Wind blowing, trees whisper
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