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Dileepa Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Comparing two things

In the following sentence, what I needed to do was compare the homeschooling and formal education. My question is homeschooling is a concept and institutes or schools are places. Therefore, could someone please let me know how to compare such two different things. Furthermore, I would really appreciate it if someone could tell me which of the following sentences are correct and natural.


Though the received wisdom is children going to schools is necessary, some critics believe that homeschooling is better than educational institutes.


Though the received wisdom is children going to schools is necessary, some critics believe that homeschooling is better than going to educational institutes.


Though the received wisdom is children going to schools is necessary, some critics believe that homeschooling is better than learning from educational institutes.

  

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I think your last sentence is the best for overcoming the problem you are most concerned about, but even that one could use a little improvement. Here's my attempt at (nearly) the same sentence, comparing place to place. This is only one way to write it.

  • I think your last sentence is the best for overcoming the problem you are most concerned about, but even that one could use a little improvement.
  • Here's my attempt at (nearly) the same sentence, comparing place to place.
  • This is only one way to write it.
  • You may be able to come up with something better.
  • Though the received wisdom is that children should be schooled, some critics believe that this undertaking is better accomplished at home than in educational institutions.
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I think your last sentence is the best for overcoming the problem you are most concerned about, but even that one could use a little improvement.

Here's my attempt at (nearly) the same sentence, comparing place to place. This is only one way to write it. You may be able to come up with something better.

Though the received wisdom is that children should be schooled, some criti

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