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comparing two cities

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Comparing two cities A and B.

1) The population density of A is 20000 per square kilometers, which means A has a higher population density than B with the population density of 111 per square kilometers.
2) The composition of A consists of native Nepalese while B has the composition of diverse ethnic groups of Mongols, Russians and Chinese.
  

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I suggest 1) The population density of A is 20,000 per square kilometer , which means that A has a higher population density than B, which has a population density of 111 per square kilometer. 2) The composition of A is native Nepalese, while B is composed of diverse ethnic groups of Mongols, Russians and Chinese.

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  • I suggest 1) The population density of A is 20,000 per square kilometer , which means that A has a higher population density than B, which has a population density of 111 per square kilometer.
  • 2) The composition of A is native Nepalese, while B is composed of diverse ethnic groups of Mongols, Russians and Chinese.
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I suggest
1) The population density of A is 20,000 per square kilometer, which means that A has a higher population density than B, which has a population density of 111 per square kilometer.
2) The composition of A is native Nepalese, while B is composed of diverse ethnic groups of Mongols, Russians and Chinese.
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