Most people think the rural area has combined many wonderful things like the peaceful environment, friendly people than a city that have existed lots of problem with social. But, in fact, it is true that no place is perfect. It means each place also has a typical point and this essay will discuss that
Like the majority of everyone’s thoughts,the countryside has a specific environment with people and sights. The people here have an honest personality, they always ready to help anyone meet a problem, without any intention. In addition, the beautiful simple sight that the city can’t have such as any high traffic, the air is not polluted and so on. Also, each people have a different view of the living standard in that place. To the farmer, this is the best place to live although they don’t have enough money or a modern machine. But, with people in the city who come to a rural area and stay in a few days. It will definitely bring them a feeling that uncomfortable due to lack of shopping mall or internet.
In contrast, we can’t deny the convenience of the city bring to us such as high tech applied in life and many wonderful things. However, it will not surprise when they have to face many side effects on these things. First, the environment can’t compare with the countryside. It is polluted, constantly occur accident by high traffic on a road. Lacking green space, instead of the building everywhere. The people seem to busy all the time with their work. As a result, they can be easily stressed because of their modern lifestyle. Moreover, it also exists a lot of problems with modern in many respect. For example, children are an object which can be influenced by the convenient of technology. Social evils or criminal activity is coming from here because of the effect of violent concept, nasty information and so on.
To sum up, besides many factors like environment or lifestyle. It is true some difference between city and rural area in many aspects. Trying to adapt with them due to no place is perfect, just blossom where you are planted.
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