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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Business & Finance
Company Introduction - Revision If needed - Help ! :)
Hi Everyone,
I have visited these forums for a while now and have found it very helpful.
I am a multimedia artist and have been working with several small business and invidiuals with their graphical needs.I am currently working on my website and had written an introduction or a welcome paragraph. I wanted to keep it short and simple.
Here is what I have written:
""For years I have helped Individuals and Small business's with their needs at an affordable price. My designs have reached out to many with various cultures and interests. I work with the trend while keeping the originality of Art to provide results that are out of ordinary; with a new taste to an old or vice versa to appeal every generation.""
I would like to request someone who could revise it for me to make it sound much more proffesional without any grammar mistakes.
Also, I have to compose more written material for my website. If someone is interested in helping me out I can help them out by designing any material for them for free.
Thank you
Zain Chaudry
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I have visited these forums for a while now and have found it very helpful.
I am a multimedia artist and have been working with several small business and invidiuals with their graphical needs.I am currently working on my website and had written an introduction or a welcome paragraph. I wanted to keep it short and simple.
Here is what I have written:
""For years I have helped Individuals and Small business's with their needs at an affordable price. My designs have reached out to many with various cultures and interests. I work with the trend while keeping the originality of Art to provide results that are out of ordinary; with a new taste to an old or vice versa to appeal every generation.""
I would like to request someone who could revise it for me to make it sound much more proffesional without any grammar mistakes.
Also, I have to compose more written material for my website. If someone is interested in helping me out I can help them out by designing any material for them for free.
Thank you
Zain Chaudry
Email Removed">[ email address removed by moderator. You can put contact information in your profile. ]
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The bold faced letters are grammatical corrections. The italicized words are only suggestions For years I have helped Individuals and s mall business es with their needs at an affordable price. My designs have reached out (appealed) to many (people) with various cultures and interests.
- The bold faced letters are grammatical corrections.
- The italicized words are only suggestions For years I have helped Individuals and s mall business es with their needs at an affordable price.
- My designs have reached out (appealed) to many (people) with various cultures and interests.
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The bold faced letters are grammatical corrections. The italicized words are only suggestions
For years I have helped Individuals and small businesses with their needs at an affordable price. My designs have reached out (appealed) to many (people) with various cultures and interests. I work (keep up with the latest trends) with t
For years I have helped Individuals and small businesses with their needs at an affordable price. My designs have reached out (appealed) to many (people) with various cultures and interests. I work (keep up with the latest trends) with t
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