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Perfect Stranger Posted 14 years ago
Business & Finance

Company description 2 - fishy sentences

Hi again,

Here are some more sentences I'm struggling with. Would you please devote a few minutes of your time and have a look at them?
  1. The company's annual construction capacity is over 7 billion US dollars. I'm not sure if one can express construction capacity in money, plus, is the saxon genitive necessary here?
  2. The company is in possession of many construction plants 6,600 units of equipment, the total power of which equals 800,700 k.w. This whole sentence sounds a bit awkward to me, especially the highlighted part.

  3. ?148 projects have won state and provincial quality awards. Hmm... shouldn't it be... awards for quality ?

    Thanks a million
  

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I realize this question is a bit longish but if you guys could have a look and possibly answer at least part it, I'd be much obliged
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Anyone? At least the first example Emotion: wink ?
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