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BW2/3 Posted 19 years ago
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While John was using a treadmill, his left eye veered off to a girl using hers. The girl began to notice that he was checking on her and she smiled a little bit. Never know why so many girls, I meant a lot, attracted to him. Every where he went, some girls attracted to her but he never made his move. Maybe he was tired or he didn't have time for that. Above all maybe it was not his personality. Instantly John decided that he didn't want to observe her luscious figure and speeded up his treadmill, so he could get tired faster. In the mean time, the fitness center played one of his favorite American songs. It was the song that he first heard on a prom party. It was the song that he and girlfriend both loved very much. It was the song that brought back a lot of cherishe memories. It was the song he would love to play over again and again for his wedding if he wanted to marry. He could remember the first few lines very well. The melody and lyric were really affected his emotion.

After finishing the treadmill, he used other equipments. The girl was still using her treadmill. He asked one of trainers there to show him how to use a machine in a corner. John was thinking to get six packs and build up his chest. He wanted a bigger chest and he thought that looked good on him. He followed the trainer instruction and used it for about 10 minutes. In a half hour, he used all the machines he wanted and left.





  

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While John was using a treadmill, his eyes veered off to a girl using another treadmill. The girl began to notice that he was checking on her and she smiled a bit. I never know why so many girls were attracted to him.

  • While John was using a treadmill, his eyes veered off to a girl using another treadmill.
  • The girl began to notice that he was checking on her and she smiled a bit.
  • I never know why so many girls were attracted to him.
  • Everywhere he went, some girls were attracted to him but he never made his move.
  • Maybe he was tired or he didn't have time for them.
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While John was using a treadmill, his eyes veered off to a girl using another treadmill. The girl began to notice that he was checking on her and she smiled a bit. I never know why so many girls were attracted to him. Everywhere he went, some girls were attracted to him but he never made his move. Maybe he was tired or he didn't have time for them. Probably it was not his personality. John decided

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