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As soon as the girl got off the next stop, a guy who was smell awfully was pushing the supermarket cart. The cart was full of soda cans. His hair, beard and mustache were long and clothes were rugged. He began to sit next to John, who prayed him not to. It was very hard to read the articles for him when the smelling and dirty guy sat around him. The guy talked loud as if he spoke to everyone. Then he turned into John and asked him what he was reading. John said he was reading nothing interested. Then the guy kept talking and never shut up. John began to get nervous when he looked at the guy with his angry eyes. Finally he made up his mind that he had to get off next stop to get rid of the stinky guy.
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When the girl got off at the next stop, a guy who smelled awful was pushing a supermarket cart. The cart was full of soda cans. His hair, beard and mustache were long and his clothes were ragged .
- When the girl got off at the next stop, a guy who smelled awful was pushing a supermarket cart.
- The cart was full of soda cans.
- His hair, beard and mustache were long and his clothes were ragged .
- He began to sit next to John, who had prayed that he wouldn't .
- It was very hard for him to read his magazine when the smelly and dirty guy sat near him.
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When the girl got off at the next stop, a guy who smelled awful was pushing a supermarket cart. The cart was full of soda cans. His hair, beard and mustache were long and his clothes were ragged. He began to sit next to John,
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