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BW2/3 Posted 19 years ago
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When the train finally came, he was standing on the edge platform and looking at the train windows. Then he saw a pretty girl in a car about one way from the car he was about to get in. He quickly went to the car where the girl sat. The girl sitting at the window was reading her fashion magazine. She had long hair and worn eyeglasses. Also she looked sexy too in her trouser and tight shirt. John sat closed to her. John also took out some magazine from his bag. This was only time that he read something in the whole day. He took out Newsweek, going to the articles that he was interested to read first.
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When the train finally came in , he was standing on the edge of the platform and looking at the train windows. Then he saw a pretty girl in a car a bout one way one away from the car he was about to get in. He quickly went to the car where the girl sat.
- When the train finally came in , he was standing on the edge of the platform and looking at the train windows.
- Then he saw a pretty girl in a car a bout one way one away from the car he was about to get in.
- He quickly went to the car where the girl sat.
- She was sitting at the window was reading her fashion magazine.
- She had long hair and worn eyeglasses wore glasses .
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When the train finally came in, he was standing on the edge of the platform and looking at the train windows. Then he saw a pretty girl in a car about one way one away from the car he was about to get in. He quickly went to the car where the girl sat. She was sitting at t
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