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When Jane saw her train coming, she said goodbye to John. He saw her walk to end of the platform, enjoying staring at her in her high heels. Two more trains had gone by, yet his train had not come. Glimpsing his Mickey watch few times, he began to curse. Every one knew him he was a philistine although he went to college. Nonetheless, he had a bad habit that he cursed, smoked, and watched a lot of pornography movies. He was a social person but people could not stand him after they knew him. He had been dumped by many girls. The girls wanted a relationship but he wanted sex. While he was with other girls, he had never thought other aspects of relationships. His older brother influenced him about it a lot. John once believed in unconditional love and protection and he expected his girl did the same. But one traumatic relationship turned him into a different person. Sometimes he regretted his past. He could have found happiness with his high school sweetheart and had a dozen of children. But he broke her heart and she never forgave her. It was very despicable what John had done.

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