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After the workout, his girlfriend Jane asked him to meet her at Subway right across the hospital where she worked. Before he left, he took a public shower with all those men. It made him uncomfortable. He knew there was couple of gay guys checking on him. That made him even more uncomfortable. As a matter of fact, he knew them because his friend Smith was gay. He saw Smith with them the other day in his work place cafeteria. They greeted him warmly after the shower, so did John.

It was about ten blocks away from the gym. He felt pretty fresh and full of energy after the work out. Again, he bought another Gatorade. A cashier thought she saw him on TV. Then John was teasing him 'was I a bad guy?' She replied that she thought he was the guy who played a funny guy.

In Subway, his girlfriend already sat there waiting for her. When a bosom waitress came, he ordered ham and turkey sandwich. His eyes immediately wandered off to the waitress. His girlfriend was so furious. She screamed at him as if she didn't care if any body had heard. John felt so embarrassing that he had to walk away to a restroom. He washed his face. A guy told him he saw what happened there. He envied John because he had never known a girl loved a guy very much. When he backed to his seat, his girlfriend left. He had no mood to eat his sandwich. Then he left the place even though there was heavy raining outside.

Is the above passage correct?

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