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Naked chef Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Community movement
Dear all,
Could you please help me with correcting my English?
This is important for me that I put this on our corporate Website.
Your help is really appreciated.
We (xx) organised Health talk about Dengue Prevention at (xx)NunnerySchoolwhich is our new project area in (Town). It was really successful that over 180 people (children and their parents attended and listened to the talk very carefully. After the talk, we did questions and answers session and all those who got the right answers were rewarded some sweets. We also gave out some snacks and pack of milk to the children then.
After that, we went on to (xx)NunnerySchool which is also located in Thanlynn with CSI volunteer doctors to provide mobile clinic to the children. We found about 10 children who are sick and they can not afford the medical expense.
On Sunday, xx September 2012, We (organisation name) organised a big donation at (xx) NunnerySchool in Thanlynn coordinated with other group of community worker: Benevolence Youths, Story teller group, White share group. While we were providing the children some game and activities, the story teller group were telling the morals stories including performance developing children’s thinking skills and behaviour. Then each groups donated some stationary stuff, rice bags , clothes and money etc.. (xx) donated 6 packaged of ready made dry noodle (included 30 small packs in each) , 3 packaged of soy milk (included 60 small bottles in each) and clothes which we got from library member and teaching centre students as donation. (xx) is now doing networking with other community groups in Education, Health Care and Social Welfare support for the community development.
Thanks in advance for your help!
Naked Chef
Could you please help me with correcting my English?
This is important for me that I put this on our corporate Website.
Your help is really appreciated.
We (xx) organised Health talk about Dengue Prevention at (xx)NunnerySchoolwhich is our new project area in (Town). It was really successful that over 180 people (children and their parents attended and listened to the talk very carefully. After the talk, we did questions and answers session and all those who got the right answers were rewarded some sweets. We also gave out some snacks and pack of milk to the children then.
After that, we went on to (xx)NunnerySchool which is also located in Thanlynn with CSI volunteer doctors to provide mobile clinic to the children. We found about 10 children who are sick and they can not afford the medical expense.
On Sunday, xx September 2012, We (organisation name) organised a big donation at (xx) NunnerySchool in Thanlynn coordinated with other group of community worker: Benevolence Youths, Story teller group, White share group. While we were providing the children some game and activities, the story teller group were telling the morals stories including performance developing children’s thinking skills and behaviour. Then each groups donated some stationary stuff, rice bags , clothes and money etc.. (xx) donated 6 packaged of ready made dry noodle (included 30 small packs in each) , 3 packaged of soy milk (included 60 small bottles in each) and clothes which we got from library member and teaching centre students as donation. (xx) is now doing networking with other community groups in Education, Health Care and Social Welfare support for the community development.
Thanks in advance for your help!
Naked Chef
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