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In the following two passages, which one do you think is more clear with respect to communication.

Multiple languages is also problematic in that it creates huge political issues and enmity. On the other hand, since the world as is is not a single language world, and languages is not purely tool of communication because it is a cultural artifact, therefore steps towards one single language in the already multi-lingual world may not necessarily be a good thing as it reduces diversity of a complex context.

Multiple languages are also problematic in that they create huge political issues and enmities. On the other hand, since the world as is is not a single language world, and languages are not purely tools of communication because they are cultural artifacts, therefore steps toward one single language in the already multi-lingual world may not necessarily be a good thing as it reduces diversity of a complex context.
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In the following two passages, which one do you think is more clear with respect to communication. Multiple languages is also problematic in that it creates huge political issues and enmity. On the other hand, since the world as is is not a single language world, and languages is not purely tool of communication because it is a cultural artifact, therefore steps towards one single language in the already multi-lingual world may not necessarily be a good thing as it reduces diversity of a complex context.

  • In the following two passages, which one do you think is more clear with respect to communication.
  • Multiple languages is also problematic in that it creates huge political issues and enmity.
  • On the other hand, since the world as is is not a single language world, and languages is not purely tool of communication because it is a cultural artifact, therefore steps towards one single language in the already multi-lingual world may not necessarily be a good thing as it reduces diversity of a complex context.
  • Multiple languages are also problematic in that they create huge political issues and enmities.
  • On the other hand, since the world as is is not a single language world, and languages are not purely tools of communication because they are cultural artifacts, therefore steps toward one single language in the already multi-lingual world may not necessarily be a good thing as it reduces diversity of a complex context.
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In the following two passages, which one do you think is more clear with respect to communication.

Multiple languages is also problematic in that it creates huge political issues and enmity. On the other hand, since the world as is is not a single language world, and languages is not purely tool of communication because it is a cultural artifact, therefore steps towards one single languag
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In the following two passages, which one do you think is more clear with respect to communication.
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Multiple languages are also problematic in that they create huge political issues and enmities. On the other hand, since the world as is is not a single language world, and languages are not purely tools of communication because they are cultural artifacts, therefore steps toward one singl

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