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Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
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Hi all,

Can somebody please comments the English?
Regards,
Fizzi

While X is commonly used by nurses as a source of information , it has been criticized in several studies for providing poor quality of information that may have negative impact on vitamins use.

  

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Hi Fizzi, While X is commonly used by nurses as a source of information , it has been criticized in several studies for providing poor quality of information that may have negative impact on vitamins use. I suggest this. While X is commonly used by nurses as a source of information, it has been criticized in several studies for providing information of poor quality that may have a negative impact on the use of vitamins.

— Clive

  • Hi Fizzi, While X is commonly used by nurses as a source of information , it has been criticized in several studies for providing poor quality of information that may have negative impact on vitamins use.
  • I suggest this.
  • While X is commonly used by nurses as a source of information, it has been criticized in several studies for providing information of poor quality that may have a negative impact on the use of vitamins.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Fizzi,
While X is commonly used by nurses as a source of information , it has been criticized in several studies for providing poor quality of information that may have negative impact on vitamins use.

I suggest this.
While X is commonly used by nurses as a source of information, it has been criticized in several studies for providing information of poor quality that may have
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Thanks Clive,

Regards,

Fizzi
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