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0Hi everyone! Could someone please help me by giving me some comments about my motivation letter?? Im going to deliver it within 4 hours!! 05002br
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00For example, I wonder if there is something more I should write, like more about my motivation, or is the letter too superficial or blablabla etc.??? 02br
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00Thanks![<:o)]02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam02br
00My name is *****. I am studying marketing for the second year, and I would like to be a student at 00.00Being a student at the (My university*****) 00has given me numerous opportunities, both career wise and in terms of personal development. One of the finest opportunities at ***** is the possibility to be an exchange student at 00. 00In my spare time I dream about traveling and experiencing new cultures. I have never been to the 010200 before, but I think it would be a pleasure to live there for six months, studying something that really interests me. I have heard that social life at 00is great, and the students seem highly motivated both academically and socially. 00As a person, I am a pleasant, outgoing girl, but at the same time very goal-oriented. Structure and continuity are particularly important to me. Besides studies my hobbies are *** (a student organization which works for innovation and entrepreneurship among students), sailing, snowboard, traveling, fitness and music production.00To study at 010200's best public university would be an honor, and the opportunity to specialize in something that is interesting and relevant to me is also why I am extremely motivated. 02br
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00Briefly, my plan for the future is to take a master's degree in economics, work in a large, attractive company, and in time develop my own company. I really think that a semester at 00will help me to develop not only as a greater student, but as a more mature and grown up human being. The cross cultural differences will also help me to broaden my perspective.02br
00Specialization in innovation, entrepreneurship and technology would strengthen my knowledge and help me forward with my career plans. I believe that personal interest in the courses of study at 00is a basic requirement to handle the large workload. I know that the workload is considerably greater compared to *****, and that you have to work non-stop on courses. That suits me perfectly. I am at my best when I am under pressure to complete tasks properly, and I like to have much to do. 00 00I have been sitting on the board of "***" for one year. My membership in "***" has given me even more insight into the importance of innovation and entrepreneurship, and specializing in this area at 00will hopefully increase and intensify this interest. 00 00I look forward to receiving a positive response to this application.00Yours faithfully02br
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