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Roalva82 Posted 15 years ago
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Hi everyone, I have the following paragraph and it would be a lot of help if you can give me some feedback on any corrections that I should make on it.
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Bangladesh started this adaptation plan since 2005 following the political structure shown below. They have a clear view of what they need, how they are going to achieve it and who is responsible of making it possible. The remaining question is if they will have the financial resources to do it, and it is therefore essential not only to continue improving their economy but also to accelerate this process through international cooperation. It is estimated that the total cost of the Programme for the first 5 years can be approximately $ 5 billion dollars. It is interesting to compare this amount to the designated budget of Bangladesh´s military forces which ascend to $ 1 billion dollars.
  

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I would make a few small corrections or suggestions. Bangladesh started this adaptation plan in since 2005 following the political structure shown below. They have a clear view of what they need, how they are going to achieve it and who is responsible of making it possible.

— Doctor D

  • I would make a few small corrections or suggestions.
  • Bangladesh started this adaptation plan in since 2005 following the political structure shown below.
  • They have a clear view of what they need, how they are going to achieve it and who is responsible of making it possible.
  • The [only] remaining question is if they will have the financial resources to do it.
  • , and I t is therefore essential not only to continue improving their economy but also to accelerate this process through international cooperation.
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I would make a few small corrections or suggestions.

Bangladesh started this adaptation plan in since 2005 following the political structure shown below. They have a clear view of what they need, how they are going to achieve it and who is responsible of making it possible. The [only] remaining question is if they will have the financial resources to do it
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