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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Can you correct the grammar?

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The more people that enter into the pot increases the chance that even more people will enter it.

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Your version is understandable but not idiomatic. Here is a better version (it still feels awkward but I can't come up with a better formulation at the moment): The more people who enter into the pot the greater the chance that even more people will enter it.

— MalRey

  • Your version is understandable but not idiomatic.
  • Here is a better version (it still feels awkward but I can't come up with a better formulation at the moment): The more people who enter into the pot the greater the chance that even more people will enter it.
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Your version is understandable but not idiomatic.

Here is a better version (it still feels awkward but I can't come up with a better formulation at the moment):
The more people who enter into the pot the greater the chance that even more people will enter it.
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