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Dakota Nelson Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Commas Everywhere.

Does the following sentence have too many commas?
"Hockey players, clad in yellow, and white, or yellow, and purple, rush onto the ice"

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Dakota Nelson Does the following sentence have too many commas? Well, yes, there are quite a few there. You don't really need any of them.

— CalifJim

  • Dakota Nelson Does the following sentence have too many commas?
  • Well, yes, there are quite a few there.
  • You don't really need any of them.
  • Hockey players clad in yellow and white or yellow and purple rush onto the ice.
  • CJ
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Dakota NelsonDoes the following sentence have too many commas?
Well, yes, there are quite a few there. You don't really need any of them.

Hockey players clad in yellow and white or yellow and purple rush onto the ice.

CJ
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