Commas
Are commas properly used in these four phrases?
Text1
Established services as primary recurring revenue driver, developed 3-year strategic business plan, and built service centers in key locations. Service sales grew x% in 1styear and x% on average year-over-year.
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Established services as primary recurring revenue driver. Developed 3-year strategic business plan and built service centers in key locations. Service sales grew x% in 1st year and x% on average year-over-year.
Text2Developed and executed sales plan to grow MRO national accounts, leading to double-digit top-line growth and establishment of channel as consistent revenue driver for 5+ years.
Text3
Managed budget through rigid expense control and drove zero-based method to eliminate wasteful expenditures, resulting in x% expense reduction in 1st year.
Text4
Passionate about building and leading top-performing teams, and establishing customer satisfaction as main point of differentiation.
Top answer
It took me a minute to realize that these "sentences" were probably for a resume. At first I thought they weren't usable at all because there are no subjects, so they aren't sentences. So if you are using them to list what you have done on a resume, all the phrases are fine.
- It took me a minute to realize that these "sentences" were probably for a resume.
- At first I thought they weren't usable at all because there are no subjects, so they aren't sentences.
- So if you are using them to list what you have done on a resume, all the phrases are fine.
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It took me a minute to realize that these "sentences" were probably for a resume. At first I thought they weren't usable at all because there are no subjects, so they aren't sentences. So if you are using them to list what you have done on a resume, all the phrases are fine.
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