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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Commas

So I am writing a job application and I initially wrote it like this:


"I am seeking immediate work, within a company, that will constantly challenge me; thus providing a platform where I am forced to adapt, and grow as an individual."


I was told to remove the first two commas and place a comma in stead of the semi-colon. Does that seem right?

  

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anonymous I was told to remove the first two commas and place a comma in stead of the semi-colon. Does that seem right? Yes.

— CalifJim

  • anonymous I was told to remove the first two commas and place a comma in stead of the semi-colon.
  • Does that seem right?
  • Yes.
  • And you need to remove the last comma as well (the one before "and grow").
  • CJ
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anonymousI was told to remove the first two commas and place a comma in stead of the semi-colon. Does that seem right?

Yes. And you need to remove the last comma as well (the one before "and grow").

CJ

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