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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Commas

Hi,
could you please check this sentence for me:

I am convinced that my knowledge, experience and personal characteristics gained during my studies and work will match your requirements and help to achieve your objectives.

should I put commas between characteristics ANDgained,
and between work AND will?
  

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You need to re-write the sentence. One does not gain personal characteristics.

— AlpheccaStars

  • You need to re-write the sentence.
  • One does not gain personal characteristics.
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You need to re-write the sentence. One does not gain personal characteristics.
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AlpheccaStarsYou need to re-write the sentence. One does not gain personal characteristics.
Thank you for your advice;

would it be ok?
I am convinced that my knowledge and experience gained during my studies and work combined with my personal characteristics will match your requirements and help to achieve your objectives.
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I am convinced that my knowledge and experience gained during my studies and work combined with my personal characteristics will match your requirements and help you achieve your objectives.

What about this?
I am convinced that that total package that I offer — my personal characteristics, knowledge and work experience — will match your requirements and help you achieve your
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AlpheccaStarsI am convinced that my knowledge and experience gained during my studies and work combined with my personal characteristics will match your requirements and help you achieve your objectives. What about this?I am convinced that that total package that I offer — my personal characteristics, knowledge and work experience — will match your requirements and help y
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