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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Commas

I have a question about the proper use of a comma, but maybe I am beginning the sentence incorrectly.
This is an example of the way I explain the work done on a service call for an elevator.

Upon arrival, unit was at bottom landing and inoperable.

Is this the correct use of the comma?
Should I be beginning this sentence with the word 'Upon"?
  

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Anonymous Is this the correct use of the comma? If you don't use articles, it becomes telegraph English and tha comma is irrelevant. In addition, it is, I presume, you and not the unit that arrived.

  • Anonymous Is this the correct use of the comma?
  • If you don't use articles, it becomes telegraph English and tha comma is irrelevant.
  • In addition, it is, I presume, you and not the unit that arrived.
  • Upon our arrival, the unit was at the bottom landing and inoperable.
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AnonymousIs this the correct use of the comma?
If you don't use articles, it becomes telegraph English and tha comma is irrelevant. In addition, it is, I presume, you and not the unit that arrived.

Upon our arrival, the unit was at the bottom landing and inoperable.

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