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Eim101 Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
commas
Hi, I am just wondering about the following sentence. I am unsure where I should place the commas:
"I conducted a context analysis and feasibility study to develop the IPSIA’s urban programme in Paraguay dealing with service provision and capacity building of community-based organisations in the informal settlements with the aim of strengthening people’s livelihoods."
Any help would be greatly appreciated.
"I conducted a context analysis and feasibility study to develop the IPSIA’s urban programme in Paraguay dealing with service provision and capacity building of community-based organisations in the informal settlements with the aim of strengthening people’s livelihoods."
Any help would be greatly appreciated.
Top answer
No comma is needed. That sure is a mouthful, though.
- No comma is needed.
- That sure is a mouthful, though.
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Hi,
It's much too long. You need to break it into more than one sentence.
Clive
It's much too long. You need to break it into more than one sentence.
Clive
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