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Soheil1 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Commas

Hi.

Why there are so many comma's in:
'In a statement issued to the BBC, Press TV's newsroom director Mr Hamid Emadi said: "We asked Ofcom if Press TV Limited did not have control over the broadcast, why was it getting fined, if it did have control, why would the licence be revoked?'

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/entertainment-arts-16652356

Does it make sense?

Thanks!
  

Top answer

It is badly punctuated. It should be '. why was it getting fined?

  • It is badly punctuated.
  • It should be '.
  • why was it getting fined?
  • If it did have control.
  • .
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It is badly punctuated.

It should be

'. . .why was it getting fined? If it did have control. . . '

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