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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Commas

Hello,

Please could somebody tell me which of these sentences is correct - mainly in relation to commas:

Once your child has grown out of nappies, this unique bin can be converted into a standard pedal bin which, with its simple styling and clean white finish, will not look out of place in your kitchen, bedroom or bathroom.



Once your child has grown out of nappies this unique bin can be converted into a standard pedal bin which with its simple styling and clean white finish will not look out of place in your kitchen, bedroom or bathroom.

Thank you


  

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I would do it this way: Once your child has grown out of nappies , this unique bin can be converted into a standard pedal bin whose simple styling and clean white finish will fit right into your kitchen, bedroom or bathroom.

  • I would do it this way: Once your child has grown out of nappies , this unique bin can be converted into a standard pedal bin whose simple styling and clean white finish will fit right into your kitchen, bedroom or bathroom.
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I would do it this way:

Once your child has grown out of nappies, this unique bin can be converted into a standard pedal bin whose simple styling and clean white finish will fit right into your kitchen, bedroom or bathroom.

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