is there a comma after thus in the following sentence is this a run on
The view of love for these men in just passion and lust, and this is an understood way of life for the men at war, thus Henry's perception of a relationship at war is nothing more than these qualities.
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I can't make this sentence work. Are you sure you've copied it correctly? Is it possible that "in" should be "is"?
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Is it possible that "in" should be "is"?
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